Original-SHM's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Smw Total Reality]

Yea,..

You've got talent but you need to work on something with a better plot and story. Here are the problems with this flash.
1.Horriable Plot and Story.
2.Way To Short.
3.Boring
4.Could'nt hear ANY of the voice overs sounded like a bunch of mubmbling learn to speak clearer.
5.WHY did you put a 50 cent song at the end? What does that have to do with mario? Dont just stick random music that dosent match the theam!

Yea this is garbage I suggest NOT continuing this and coming up with a better sprite animation. Good Luck On Future Projects
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Over All Rating: 3.5
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[Zelda's PRIDE force]

Really Good

All artwork(excpte for mario) was extremly well done. One problem in the flash. Voice acting was horriable,..and Marios voice sounded like a little girl trying to make a bad italian accent, work on the voice acting,..you know by a new mic or something? AS for humor that was hilarious and had me laughing for quite some time. Keep up the good work.

nalem responds:

That's cuz I am a girl and I voiced him, trying to make an Italian accent. ;)

[Billy Zone:Needed Message]

Wow

You look alot fatter in your profile picture then you do in this flash.

And I think if you want money it be a good idea to get something called a "job" or since your 16 years old ask your parents for some equipment for your birthday or something. I seriosuly doubt anyones going to donate anything to you,..I know I would'nt.

Bphilow1 responds:

lol, i no the profile pic this from last year so i slimed down a bit, but its basicly a joke i didn't p;ean on geting anything , but if you have a job for tell me cuz I've been trying for 3 years

[Hacked]

Really Really Bad

But If its your first flash good job. Just try and make it a little longer next time. Also try and add some more humor and jokes.

MasterLock responds:

Well, it's my first movie, if that's what you mean by flash.

[Sobe - Fuel Drink]

Not Bad

The accent the announcer has adds most of the humor to it.