Original-SHM's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[:OLD CRAP: Peach's Love]

Not Very good,..

You need to make your flashes more entertaining. I really dont feel like seeing a bunch of word blimps appear out of mario sprites standing around. Next time try and act out voices. The story was alright here and there. Yea next time put some more effort into your flashes. Good luck on future projects.
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Over All Score 4.9
Thumb:Pointing slightly down

vestiges responds:

i couldn,t get good voices, i would try but by voice cracks too easily.

[Gravlin Ep.1]

Not really that bad

I dont think this deserves turd of the week at all. I have seen much worse flashes pass judgement. It looks like to me the animator is actually skilled in flash, but just didnt think this idea through. Improve your style of drawing and maybe think of up a plot(With no screaming hopefully) and you may have a good flash with postive comments. Good luck on all your future flashes man. Just because you got turd of the week dosent mean you cant make good flashes.

[Peanut Butter Jelly]

Not that bad

It was'nt that bad, I found a little humerous and I like jazz so I enjoyed it. The graphics you put in for the instruments looked impresive the clock eyes on the banana,..well that was a bad idea. This flash was okay.ITs not nearly as bad as half these reviews say it is, I think it deserves a watch.
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Over all score: 5.3/10
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[Peanut Butter Jelly 2004]

Amazing

One of the "better flashes" on this site !

[Mortal Kombat Mishaps]

That was great

All the skits where hilarious thanks for a good laugh man.

[MMMMMMMMMMMM]

going for turd of the week?

You might be getting it man, and if your going to try and fool people with another bad flash try and make the preloader better, then people will vote REAL high without even watching it.

[Todd & Dan - NG BBS Users]

funny

That was hilarious

[Stick Fight (good!)]

Nice Job

The stick fight was very well animatied and had a nice flow. I did'nt like it how at the end it just randomly stoped, kind of leaving me in suspense there. IF your going to make another stick fight flash I strongly urge you to add some more effects to your flash. Some blood, and maybe a little more detail on weapons. Coloring or making a back ground may have helped as well. I also think adding a plot would add some intrest,..maybe an objective or over all goal for our main character(rescure some one, revenge, trying to defeat boss ect.) Other then the problems I named this flash was not half bad. Good Luck On All Future Flash Projects.
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Over All Rating:6.5
Thumb:In The Middle

[Groin Shots are Overrated]

Not That Bad

Your Animation was enjoyable and I found the pop culture argument a little humoreous. Here are the pros and cons of your flash.

Pros:
1.Smooth overall animating effects
2.Very nicely well drawn weapons
3.A little humor at the end.

Cons:
1.Sticks(Yea I made a stick flash too) Yea stay away from sticks unless your flash is so funny that no one will care.

For the most part good job, That flash was'nt bad at all you may have potential for something better in the future. I look forward to all flashes submited by you
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Overall rating:7/10
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Avenator responds:

Thanks very much. I had no idea this would pass judgement.

[Megaman Meets Gaiden]

Sorry Man,...

Your Graphic style looked okay, And I thought this may be about to be an okay flash. Then,...the bathroom humor and all was lost. Next time when animating a flash keep in mind that Bathroom humor (farting,poop,pee ect.) pretty much went out when everyone started going to middle school. Theres a very slim chance anyone is going to spountansley burst out laughing,(unless under the age of nine) when watching this because one of the characters farted. Better luck next time, and remeber try and get something fresh and funny not immature and stupid. Good Luck On All Future Flash Projects.
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Over All Rating:2.3/10
Thumb:Down

TheDonster responds:

NP, at least you have a reason for rankin me so low