Not good
The lack of music and poor voice acting are just minor flaws compared to the bad jokes of internet pop culture. Not to mention how short this was.
Not good
The lack of music and poor voice acting are just minor flaws compared to the bad jokes of internet pop culture. Not to mention how short this was.
I've noticed that a lot of people think my voice acting is poor simply because they themselves weren't the ones that did it.
Nice
I like all your cartoons.
Thanks! i don't even like all out cartoons have you seen drive though. that thing needs a lot of work :) lol
Props to you
The graphics in this, were made at a proffesinal level it appears. A top of the line sprite animation, and the sounds were a pleasure to the ears. Good job.
Thanks man.
Room For Improvment
Guys, you need to work on the humor factor here. Im saying that jokes about a guy getting mad that his sanwichs are bad isnt that funny. Also the accents are REALLY annoying, I know you're sweedish, or something but practice that English, ditch the annoying forced spanish and french accents as well it just ISNT funny. Also the begenning was way to slow paced, I almost stoped watching, but it gradually got better. This is what you don't want to do, the begenning should grab your viewers attention, and keep my intrested. You guys do have the graphics, and animation down just work on the voice overs, and comedy, you've got something good here. An "unpolished diamond" if you will. Good luck on all future projects, hopefully this review helped.
-A fellow Flash Artist
OK, thanks. I will keep that in mind!
Humerous
I like the voice work, espicallu on the main character. Good job with this.
Thanks :D
Amazing
The graphics, on this were very well made. It was a pleasure to watch for that reason. You obviously have ALOT of talent, and I look forward to future submissions. Keep up the good work.
thanks ..i notice i get good reviews from people who have actually tried to make a movie.. and quite detailed a critical reviews from people who haven't
That was good
Humor was there, and it looked like you put alot of effort into this. I was hoping there would be more,. looking forward to part 2. Keep up the good work!
part 2 is already out, check teh newgrounds zelda page, all below
Very good for a second movie!
Your good at flash, and should keep making movies. I enjoyed this and hope to see more war submissions by you!
Damm straight you enjoyed this lol! thnx man i apprecite it this took me forever! im making more now!
Anyone who takes leveling on NG seriously is a fucking retard. End of story.
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