Original-SHM's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FUM: Fucked Up Movie]

Yeah it was Random

Well you wer'nt kidding when you said it was random. Here are the pros and cons of this flash.

Pros
1.Over all Smooth Animation.
2. A little humor mixed in there.

Cons
1.Some scenes/skits where to drawn out and lost my attention. I found my self wanting to click and X out the window when you had a stick dancing and a buch of text poping up, If your going to be random at least try and keep the persons attention and impress them Not bore them,.Or else people just exit your flash and give you 0's.

An overall OK flash, not the best graphics, AND it is suppoused to be random. Try and fix up the boring and make it more Intertaining.
Good Luck On All Future Flash Projects.
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Over All Rating: 5/10
Thumb: In The Middle

[Smw Total Reality]

Yea,..

You've got talent but you need to work on something with a better plot and story. Here are the problems with this flash.
1.Horriable Plot and Story.
2.Way To Short.
3.Boring
4.Could'nt hear ANY of the voice overs sounded like a bunch of mubmbling learn to speak clearer.
5.WHY did you put a 50 cent song at the end? What does that have to do with mario? Dont just stick random music that dosent match the theam!

Yea this is garbage I suggest NOT continuing this and coming up with a better sprite animation. Good Luck On Future Projects
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Over All Rating: 3.5
Thumb:Down

[Bored Shorts 2]

I really liked it

The music really goes well with the flash. Make more.

[Zelda's PRIDE force]

Really Good

All artwork(excpte for mario) was extremly well done. One problem in the flash. Voice acting was horriable,..and Marios voice sounded like a little girl trying to make a bad italian accent, work on the voice acting,..you know by a new mic or something? AS for humor that was hilarious and had me laughing for quite some time. Keep up the good work.

nalem responds:

That's cuz I am a girl and I voiced him, trying to make an Italian accent. ;)

[Ballistics Demonstration]

Yea,..

The drawings of the guns was amazing,...but the point of the game was bad.

[Billy Zone:Needed Message]

Wow

You look alot fatter in your profile picture then you do in this flash.

And I think if you want money it be a good idea to get something called a "job" or since your 16 years old ask your parents for some equipment for your birthday or something. I seriosuly doubt anyones going to donate anything to you,..I know I would'nt.

Bphilow1 responds:

lol, i no the profile pic this from last year so i slimed down a bit, but its basicly a joke i didn't p;ean on geting anything , but if you have a job for tell me cuz I've been trying for 3 years

[HouseOnHappyHillReloaded]

Really Good

That was really entertaining and had me laughing all over the place. I look forward to any new submissions from you guys.

Xiphon responds:

Heh, we're doing a Sci-Fi next with a couple other big artists called "Another Space Movie"

[Hacked]

Really Really Bad

But If its your first flash good job. Just try and make it a little longer next time. Also try and add some more humor and jokes.

MasterLock responds:

Well, it's my first movie, if that's what you mean by flash.

[Boredom: Part 3]

Random

I guess thats what you were going for tho right? I enjoyed watching this and I thought the music went perfectly with the randomness.
Good Job

[Sobe - Fuel Drink]

Not Bad

The accent the announcer has adds most of the humor to it.