Original-SHM's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Better Drawing in Flash]

Very Helpful

You did a good job explaining, and to think I've been using the pencil tool on flash to draw.

capn-g responds:

Happy to help

[The Coin Collector]

It was good

For the most part it was an ok game. It had a few glitches in it however. For example the enemys did'nt hurt you when they passed through you, ,and I landed on the spikes and it did'nt kill me (if you do a double jump). Aslo in your next game I like to see longer and more levels, and perhaps some more areas, like switch it up. Have a castle level, then say have a graveyard level, or something just make more variety. I also didnt see any point in getting the sword it didnt help out and after I got it the game was basically over. Make it longer next time. Good luck on future flash projects.

Cia-Vamp responds:

about the enemies not killing you: no they dont kill you, but the do take you coins away, and if you do no have enough coins, you cant get to the next level, so..
but anyway, thx and ill try to make the levels longer.

[Are You A Noob?]

Bad

I gave you some points for the graphics and the sound put into the flash. Other then that this was horriable. The questions are pointless and really pretain to what you like. Calling some one a noob because they dont like the same bands as you, or know your middle name is stupid. Also I find it odd that everyone who takes this scores "Uber Noob" or "Noob". I suggest you do remake this completley with new questions and more appropiate rankings then "Noob" this isnt counter strike. On newgrounds respect is earned through time spent here, your attitude and your ability at flash. Not stupid little questions, no doubt about it this game fails, and sadly makes you look like the noob. Better luck next time.

axeman666 responds:

Actually you score Uber Noob, Noob, Novice, Experienced, Advanced, and Tom Fulp. I dont know what you are talking about when you say you can only score Uber Noob and Noob.

[My Flash Tutor 1]

Very well made

I like the overall design of this, and its very informative and user friendly good job!

Aprime responds:

www.aprime.tk

Yup, User friendly is my middle name, no realy it is, only joking, thanks, as well as it being friendly you are too! :)

Add me to favs
oooo and can you try to submit all my work to collection please!

[The Tutorial]

Wow

Dont attempt to make a tutorial untill you know what your doing this is bad. I hate flash artists that think they're better then they really are, at what they do.

Hi-dud responds:

why do you think this is bad? huh? its good, it tells you what to do, it makes sure you get it right. i think your biased towards me, and you couldnt vote 0 if your aura is neutral.

[Thesaurus of Masturbation]

Wow that was bad

Awful, awful flash. Please practice eddie this was not good. Live up to your ptential my friend, then maybe you will one day be a good flash author. That day unfourtantly is not today :-(.

eddiebalin responds:

One day will will not be gay anymore.

That day "unfourtantly" is not today.

:-)

[_ I love you all so much!]

I'm an asshole?

Comming from the guy who said my mom sucks cum through a straw because I said one of his flashes was bad?!! heh heh eddie you immature man, once again you have proven that the bar for flash can be lowered even more. To all viewers you just type your name and it says your an asshole hahahah so creative(Sarcasam) great way to be unoriginal and make another suck flash. Practice and get some real plots and make some good flash!

P.S. Country music sucks

eddiebalin responds:

Anser to "I'm an asshole?" qwestion:

YES, BIGTIME.

yur also a throbnobbing, dicksipping, asswhacking, cuntsapping, mother nubbing cock monkey.

[Starfire]

You need to redo this game

The game would of been perfect if you fixed the fact you only had one life. Nothing more annoying then dieing and having to do the whole level over again, it sadly ruins the game and makes it lose almost all of its fun points.

sspecter responds:

I DID made 3 lives in the beta. But the fact that you have a shield and a hull to protect you made the game far too easy. So I had to take it out.

But I do agree that its not too fun to die in the boss and have to replay it. In Tyrian (1 of the bests space shooter made, my game was highly influenced by it) was the same way.

I think a checkpoint would be a better solution, as other reviews pointed out.

But thanks for the idea.

[Kill the Endangered!]

You messed up

If you right click on the flash and press play you can view the secret with out having to "earn" it. You just right click press play after the message says your rank and score and you get the secret "Killing ths six flags guy, lame secret :-("

DCFilms responds:

Well if you had taken the time to read the full lenght of the description, I already noted that fact

[The Doughnuts Show]

Very Well Made

I enjoyed the vast ammount of options you put in your flash. This kept me entertained and laughing for some time. All your art work was excllent, and the options were very entertaining and all equally well made. I also enjoyed the funk music in the background. This is an excllent flash. Good Job!
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Over All Rating: 10/10
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carmelhadinosaur responds:

Thanks!!!
I kinda... ran out of words, I guess.. :o
Im happy you liked my artwork! :)